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John William Tuohy lives in Washington DC

“You can’t build a reputation on what you are going to do.” - Henry Ford



“You can’t build a reputation on what you are going to do.” - Henry Ford

 (So turn off the TV and get to writing)



The purpose of art

 The purpose of art is washing the dust of daily life off our souls. Picasso

Once you make a decision



“Once you make a decision, the universe conspires to make it happen.” - Ralph Waldo Emerson



In his memoir, On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft,

In his memoir, On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft, King shares valuable insights into how to be a better writer. The book was first published in 2000. In 2010, a special anniversary edition of this million-copy bestseller was republished. Here are a few great pieces of advice from the memoir:
1. Stop watching television. Instead, read as much as possible: If you're just starting out as a writer, your television should be the first thing to go.   
2. Prepare for more failure and criticism than you think you can deal with: Not only will you doubt yourself, but other people will doubt you, too. Oftentimes, you have to continue writing even when you don't feel like it. And when you fail, King suggests that you remain positive. 
3. Don't waste time trying to please people: Rudeness should be the least of your concerns. "If you intend to write as truthfully as you can, your days as a member of polite society are numbered anyway," he writes.
4. Write primarily for yourself: You should write because it brings you happiness and fulfilment. As King says, "If you can do it for joy, you can do it forever."
5. Disconnect from the rest of the world: Put your desk in the corner of the room, and eliminate all possible distractions, from phones to open windows. 
6. Don't be pretentious: One of the really bad things you can do to your writing is to dress up the vocabulary, looking for long words because you're maybe a little bit ashamed of your short ones, says King.   
8. Avoid adverbs and long paragraphs: King  believes "adverbs are worst after "he said" and "she said" — those phrases are best left unadorned. Also pay attention to your paragraphs, so that they flow with the turns and rhythms of your story.  
9. Don't get overly caught up in grammar: Writing is primarily about seduction, not precision. The object of fiction isn't grammatical correctness but to make the reader welcome and then tell a story, he says.
10. Master the art of description: Description begins in the writer's imagination, but should finish in the reader's," writes King. The important part isn't writing enough, but limiting how much you say.  Visualise what you want your reader to experience, and then translate into words. The key to good description is clarity, both in observation and in writing. Use fresh images and simple vocabulary to avoid exhausting your reader. "In many cases when a reader puts a story aside because it 'got boring,' the boredom arose because the writer grew enchanted with his powers of description and lost sight of his priority," notes King.
11. Don't give too much background information: There's a difference between lecturing about what you know and using it to enrich the story," writes King. Only include details that move your story forward and persuade your reader to continue reading. If you need to research, make sure it doesn't overshadow the story. Research belongs "as far in the background and the back story as you can get it," says King. You may be entranced by what you're learning, but your readers are going to care a lot more about your characters and your story.
12. Tell stories about what people actually do: Bad writing is more than a matter of shit syntax and faulty observation; bad writing usually arises from a stubborn refusal to tell stories about what people actually do — to face the fact, let us say, that murderers sometimes help old ladies cross the street," writes King. The people in your stories are what readers care about the most, so make sure you acknowledge all the dimensions your characters may have.
13. Take risks; don't play it safe: First and foremost, stop using the passive voice. It's the biggest indicator of fear. "Fear is at the root of most bad writing," King says. "Try any goddamn thing you like, no matter how boringly normal or outrageous. If it works, fine. If it doesn't, toss it," he adds.
14. Realise that you don't need drugs to be a good writer: Substance-abusing writers are just substance-abusers. "Any claims that the drugs and alcohol are necessary to dull a finer sensibility are just the usual self-serving bullshit," believes King.
15. Don't try to steal someone else's voice: When you try to mimic another writer's style for any reason other than practice, you'll produce nothing but "pale imitations." This is because you can never try to replicate the way someone feels and experiences truth, especially not through a surface-level glance at vocabulary and plot.
16. Understand that writing is a form of telepathy: All the arts depend upon telepathy to some degree, but I believe that writing is the purest distillation, says King. An important element of writing is transference. Your job isn't to write words on the page, but rather to transfer the ideas inside your head into the heads of your readers.
17. Take your writing seriously: You can approach the act of writing with nervousness, excitement, hopefulness, or despair, says King. If you don't want to take your writing seriously, he suggests that you close the book and do something else. As writer Susan Sontag says, "The story must strike a nerve — in me. My heart should start pounding when I hear the first line in my head. I start trembling at the risk."
18. Write every single day: Once I start work on a project, I don't stop, and I don't slow down unless I absolutely have to, says King. "If I don't write every day, the characters begin to stale off in my mind ... I begin to lose my hold on the story's plot and pace." If you fail to write consistently, the excitement for your idea may begin to fade. When the work starts to feel like work, King describes the moment as "the smooch of death." His best advice is to just take it "one word at a time."
19. Finish your first draft in three months: King likes to write 10 pages a day. Over a three-month span, that amounts to around 180,000 words. "The first draft of a book — even a long one — should take no more than three months, the length of a season," he says. If you spend too long on your piece, King believes the story begins to take on an odd foreign feel.
20. When you're finished, take a long step back: King suggests six weeks of "recuperation time" after you're done writing, so you can have a clear mind to spot any glaring holes in the plot or character development. He asserts that a writer's original perception of a character could be just as faulty as the reader's. When you do find your mistakes, he says that "you are forbidden to feel depressed about them or to beat up on yourself. Screw-ups happen to the best of us."
21. Have the guts to cut: When revising, writers often have a difficult time letting go of words they spent so much time writing. But, as King advises, "Kill your darlings, even when it breaks your egocentric little scribbler's heart." Although revision is one of the most difficult parts of writing, you need to leave out the boring parts in order to move the story along. In his advice on writing, Vonnegut suggests, "If a sentence, no matter how excellent, does not illuminate your subject in some new and useful way, scratch it out."
22. Stay married, be healthy, and live a good life: King attributes his success to two things: his health and his marriage
  




A good book

“A good book, he had concluded, leaves you wanting to reread the book. A great book compels you to reread your own soul.” Richard Flanagan



If a writer


“If a writer falls in love with you, you can never die.”


I don't know whether to laugh or hang my head



So much for empathy.

Members of opposing political groups clashed Tuesday inside a so-called "empathy tent" on the campus of the University of California, Berkeley.

At least four people were arrested, police said.

The empathy tent was reportedly in place to offer protesters a calm place to unwind amid the chaos around them. But the tent ultimately offered little respite -- and nearly toppled during clashes between conservative students and leftist activists, the Los Angeles Times reported.

“It’s tough, but we do what we can to foster dialogue,” said Edwin Fulch, who reportedly used the tent for talks about the virtues of meditation and the Occupy Wall Street movement.

The protest was led by Joey Gibson, leader of a group called Patriot Prayer. Gibson had called for a rally after student organizers canceled a planned "Free Speech Week.”

Counterprotesters determined to shut the event down got into shouting matches and scuffles with Gibson and his supporters inside the tent and later in a city park.

Left-wing activist Yvonne Felarca was arrested for battery and resisting arrest, police said. Three men were arrested on charges including possession of body armor, carrying a banned weapon and participating in a riot.

Berkeley's reputation as a liberal bastion has made it a flashpoint for the country's political divisions since the election of President Donald Trump.

Four protests have turned violent on campus and in the surrounding streets in recent months, prompting authorities to tighten security as they struggle to balance free speech rights with preventing violence.

David Marquis, who identified himself as a senior at the school, said he was tired of the protests on campus. Marquis was outside the protest area and described the scene.

“If you look at them, it’s ridiculous,” Marquis told the Los Angeles Times. “You’ve got a guy with purple hair with a f---ing lightsaber talking about Hitler. It’s hard for me to take any of this seriously.”



The Associated Press contributed to this report.



Let it kill you

“My dear,

Find what you love and let it kill you.
Let it drain you of your all. Let it cling onto your back and weigh you down into eventual nothingness.
Let it kill you and let it devour your remains.
For all things will kill you, both slowly and fastly, but it’s much better to be killed by a lover.


~ Falsely yours” 





Eli, my dog, in the car



Water can


Curious




Don't you just want to see the entire world?


Tiberius


Portrait of Tiberius. Circa 30 AD. Marble.


Tiberius:  November 16  42 BC – March 16 37 AD) was a Roman emperor from 14 AD to 37 AD. Born Tiberius Claudius Nero, a Claudian, Tiberius was the son of Tiberius Claudius Nero and Livia Drusilla. His mother divorced Nero and married Octavian, later known as Augustus, in 39 BC, making him a step-son of Octavian.

Tiberius would later marry Augustus' daughter (from his marriage to Scribonia), Julia the Elder, and even later be adopted by Augustus, by which act he officially became a Julian, bearing the name Tiberius Julius Caesar. The subsequent emperors after Tiberius would continue this blended dynasty of both families for the following thirty years; historians have named it the Julio-Claudian dynasty.

In relations to the other emperors of this dynasty, Tiberius was the stepson of Augustus, grand-uncle of Caligula, paternal uncle of Claudius, and great-grand uncle of Nero. His 22-and-a-half-year reign would be the longest after Augustus's until Antoninus Pius, who surpassed his reign by a few months in 161.

Tiberius was one of the greatest Roman generals; his conquest of Pannonia, Dalmatia, Raetia, and temporarily, parts of Germania, laid the foundations for the northern frontier. But he came to be remembered as a dark, reclusive, and sombre ruler who never really desired to be emperor; Pliny the Elder called him tristissimus hominum, "the gloomiest of men."

After the death of Tiberius’ son Drusus Julius Caesar in 23 AD, he became more reclusive and aloof. In 26 AD Tiberius removed himself from Rome and left administration largely in the hands of his unscrupulous Praetorian prefects Lucius Aelius Sejanus and Quintus Naevius Sutorius Macro.

Caligula, Tiberius' grand-nephew and adopted grandson, succeeded Tiberius upon his death.

Writers hint


“What people are ashamed of usually makes a good story.”F. Scott Fitzgerald


They’re standing in a parking lot....

 “They’re standing in a parking lot and they just start talking to each other,” Kennedy aide Peter Edelman remembers. “There starts to be this circle of people around them, and then it’s two deep and three deep. … It just took a five-minute conversation and they were friends for life.” This Kennedy brother related to the poor – and to migrants in particular – the way the novelist John Steinbeck had in “The Grapes of Wrath,” trying to see the world through their eyes. 
“Bobby crossed a line no other American politician in my lifetime has ever crossed … of personal feeling and intensity and identifying with people who hurt, people who are casualties.’ I don’t see anybody since Robert Kennedy who has that depth of psychic communication and empathy with life’s losers.“  - Cesar Chavez

Bobby with United Farm workers Leader Cesar Chavez as he ends a fast designed to draw attention to the poor working conditions of Migrants in California, 1968.