WRITE IT RIGHT
A LITTLE BLACKLIST OF LITERARY
FAULTS
BY AMBROSE BIERCE
A.B.
THE BLACKLIST
A for An. "A hotel."
"A heroic man." Before an unaccented aspirate use an. The contrary
usage in this country comes of too strongly stressing our aspirates.
Action for Act. "In wrestling,
a blow is a reprehensible action." A blow is not an action but an act. An
action may consist of many acts.
Admission for Admittance. "The
price of admission is one dollar."
Admit for Confess. To admit is to
concede something affirmed. An unaccused offender cannot admit his guilt.
Adopt. "He adopted a
disguise." One may adopt a child, or an opinion, but a disguise is
assumed.
Advisedly for Advertently,
Intentionally. "It was done advisedly" should mean that it was done
after advice.
Afford. It is not well to say
"the fact affords a reasonable presumption"; "the house afforded
ample accommodation." The fact supplies a reasonable presumption. The
house offered, or gave, ample accommodation.
Afraid. Do not say, "I am
afraid it will rain." Say, I fear that it will rain.
Afterwards for Afterward.
Aggravate for Irritate. "He
aggravated me by his insolence." To aggravate is to augment the
disagreeableness of something already disagreeable, or the badness of something
bad. But a person cannot be aggravated, even if disagreeable or bad. Women are
singularly prone to misuse of this word.
All of. "He gave all of his
property." The words are contradictory: an entire thing cannot be of
itself. Omit the preposition.
Alleged. "The alleged murderer."
One can allege a murder, but not a murderer; a crime, but not a criminal. A man
that is merely suspected of crime would not, in any case, be an alleged
criminal, for an allegation is a definite and positive statement. In their
tiresome addiction to this use of alleged, the newspapers, though having mainly
in mind the danger of libel suits, can urge in further justification the lack
of any other single word that exactly expresses their meaning; but the fact that
a mud-puddle supplies the shortest route is not a compelling reason for walking
through it. One can go around.
Allow for Permit. "I allow you
to go." Precision is better attained by saying permit, for allow has other
meanings.
Allude to for Mention. What is
alluded to is not mentioned, but referred to indirectly. Originally, the word
implied a playful, or sportive, reference. That meaning is gone out of it.
And so. And yet. "And so they
were married." "And yet a woman." Omit the conjunction.
And which. And who. These forms are
incorrect unless the relative pronoun has been used previously in the sentence.
"The colt, spirited and strong, and which was unbroken, escaped from the
pasture." "John Smith, one of our leading merchants, and who fell
from a window yesterday, died this morning." Omit the conjunction.
Antecedents for Personal History.
Antecedents are predecessors.
Anticipate for Expect. "I
anticipate trouble." To anticipate is to act on an expectation in a way to
promote or forestall the event expected.
Anxious for Eager. "I was
anxious to go." Anxious should not be followed by an infinitive. Anxiety
is contemplative; eagerness, alert for action.
Appreciate for Highly Value. In the
sense of value, it means value justly, not highly. In another and preferable
sense it means to increase in value.
Approach. "The juror was
approached"; that is, overtures were made to him with a view to bribing
him. As there is no other single word for it, approach is made to serve,
figuratively; and being graphic, it is not altogether objectionable.
Appropriated for Took. "He
appropriated his neighbor's horse to his own use." To appropriate is to
set apart, as a sum of money, for a special purpose.
Approve of for Approve. There is no
sense in making approve an intransitive verb.
Apt for Likely. "One is apt to
be mistaken." Apt means facile, felicitous, ready, and the like; but even
the dictionary-makers cannot persuade a person of discriminating taste to
accept it as synonymous with likely.
Around for About. "The débris
of battle lay around them." "The huckster went around, crying his
wares." Around carries the concept of circularity.
Article. A good and useful word, but
used without meaning by shopkeepers; as, "A good article of vinegar,"
for a good vinegar.
As for That, or If. "I do not
know as he is living." This error is not very common among those who can
write at all, but one sometimes sees it in high place.
As—as for So—as. "He is not as
good as she." Say, not so good. In affirmative sentences the rule is
different: He is as good as she.
As for for As to. "As for me, I
am well." Say, as to me.
At Auction for by Auction. "The
goods were sold at auction."
At for By. "She was shocked at
his conduct." This very common solecism is without excuse.
Attain for Accomplish. "By
diligence we attain our purpose." A purpose is accomplished; success is
attained.
Authoress. A needless word—as
needless as "poetess."
Avocation for Vocation. A vocation
is, literally, a calling; that is, a trade or profession. An avocation is
something that calls one away from it. If I say that farming is some one's
avocation I mean that he practises it, not regularly, but at odd times.
Avoid for Avert. "By displaying
a light the skipper avoided a collision." To avoid is to shun; the skipper
could have avoided a collision only by getting out of the way.
Avoirdupois for Weight. Mere slang.
Back of for Behind, At the Back of.
"Back of law is force."
Backwards for Backward.
Badly for Bad. "I feel
badly." "He looks badly." The former sentence implies defective
nerves of sensation, the latter, imperfect vision. Use the adjective.
Balance for Remainder. "The
balance of my time is given to recreation." In this sense balance is a
commercial word, and relates to accounting.
Banquet. A good enough word in its
place, but its place is the dictionary. Say, dinner.
Bar for Bend. "Bar
sinister." There is no such thing in heraldry as a bar sinister.
Because for For. "I knew it was
night, because it was dark." "He will not go, because he is
ill."
Bet for Betted. The verb to bet
forms its preterite regularly, as do wet, wed, knit, quit and others that are
commonly misconjugated. It seems that we clip our short words more than we do
our long.
Body for Trunk. "The body lay
here, the head there." The body is the entire physical person (as distinguished
from the soul, or mind) and the head is a part of it. As distinguished from
head, trunk may include the limbs, but anatomically it is the torso only.
Bogus for Counterfeit, or False. The
word is slang; keep it out.
Both. This word is frequently misplaced;
as, "A large mob, both of men and women." Say, of both men and women.
Both alike. "They are both
alike." Say, they are alike. One of them could not be alike.
Brainy. Pure slang, and singularly
disagreeable.
Bug for Beetle, or for anything. Do
not use it.
Business for Right. "He has no
business to go there."
Build for Make. "Build a
fire." "Build a canal." Even "build a tunnel" is not
unknown, and probably if the wood-chuck is skilled in the American tongue he
speaks of building a hole.
But. By many writers this word (in
the sense of except) is regarded as a preposition, to be followed by the
objective case: "All went but him." It is not a preposition and may
take either the nominative or objective case, to agree with the subject or the
object of the verb. All went but he. The natives killed all but him.
But what. "I did not know but
what he was an enemy." Omit what. If condemnation of this dreadful
locution seem needless bear the matter in mind in your reading and you will
soon be of a different opinion.
By for Of. "A man by the name
of Brown." Say, of the name. Better than either form is: a man named
Brown.
Calculated for Likely. "The bad
weather is calculated to produce sickness." Calculated implies
calculation, design.
Can for May. "Can I go
fishing?" "He can call on me if he wishes to."
Candidate for Aspirant. In American
politics, one is not a candidate for an office until formally named (nominated)
for it by a convention, or otherwise, as provided by law or custom. So when a
man who is moving Heaven and Earth to procure the nomination protests that he
is "not a candidate" he tells the truth in order to deceive.
Cannot for Can. "I cannot but
go." Say, I can but go.
Capable. "Men are capable of
being flattered." Say, susceptible to flattery. "Capable of being
refuted." Vulnerable to refutation. Unlike capacity, capability is not
passive, but active. We are capable of doing, not of having something done to
us.
Capacity for Ability. "A great
capacity for work." Capacity is receptive; ability, potential. A sponge
has capacity for water; the hand, ability to squeeze it out.
Casket for Coffin. A needless
euphemism affected by undertakers.
Casualties for Losses in Battle. The
essence of casualty is accident, absence of design. Death and wounds in battle
are produced otherwise, are expectable and expected, and, by the enemy,
intentional.
Chance for Opportunity. "He had
a good chance to succeed."
Chin Whiskers. The whisker grows on
the cheek, not the chin.
Chivalrous. The word is popularly used
in the Southern States only, and commonly has reference to men's manner toward
women. Archaic, stilted and fantastic.
Citizen for Civilian. A soldier may
be a citizen, but is not a civilian.
Claim for Affirm. "I claim that
he is elected." To claim is to assert ownership.
Clever for Obliging. In this sense
the word was once in general use in the United States, but is now seldom heard
and life here is less insupportable.
Climb down. In climbing one ascends.
Coat for Coating. "A coat of
paint, or varnish." If we coat something we produce a coating, not a coat.
Collateral Descendant. There can be
none: a "collateral descendant" is not a descendant.
Colonel, Judge, Governor, etc., for
Mister. Give a man a title only if it belongs to him, and only while it belongs
to him.
Combine for Combination. The word,
in this sense, has something of the meaning of conspiracy, but there is no
justification for it as a noun, in any sense.
Commence for Begin. This is not
actually incorrect, but—well, it is a matter of taste.
Commencement for Termination. A
contribution to our noble tongue by its scholastic conservators,
"commencement day" being their name for the last day of the
collegiate year. It is ingeniously defended on the ground that on that day
those on whom degrees are bestowed commence to hold them. Lovely!
Commit Suicide. Instead of "He
committed suicide," say, He killed himself, or, He took his life. For
married we do not say "committed matrimony." Unfortunately most of us
do say, "got married," which is almost as bad. For lack of a suitable
verb we just sometimes say committed this or that, as in the instance of
bigamy, for the verb to bigam is a blessing that is still in store for us.
Compare with for Compare to.
"He had the immodesty to compare himself with Shakespeare." Nothing
necessarily immodest in that. Comparison with may be for observing a
difference; comparison to affirms a similarity.
Complected. Anticipatory past
participle of the verb "to complect." Let us wait for that.
Conclude for Decide. "I
concluded to go to town." Having concluded a course of reasoning (implied)
I decided to go to town. A decision is supposed to be made at the conclusion of
a course of reasoning, but is not the conclusion itself. Conversely, the
conclusion of a syllogism is not a decision, but an inference.
Connection. "In this connection
I should like to say a word or two." In connection with this matter.
Conscious for Aware. "The King
was conscious of the conspiracy." We are conscious of what we feel; aware
of what we know.
Consent for Assent. "He
consented to that opinion." To consent is to agree to a proposal; to
assent is to agree with a proposition.
Conservative for Moderate. "A
conservative estimate"; "a conservative forecast"; "a
conservative statement," and so on. These and many other abuses of the
word are of recent growth in the newspapers and "halls of
legislation." Having been found to have several meanings, conservative
seems to be thought to mean everything.
Continually and Continuously. It
seems that these words should have the same meaning, but in their use by good
writers there is a difference. What is done continually is not done all the
time, but continuous action is without interruption. A loquacious fellow, who
nevertheless finds time to eat and sleep, is continually talking; but a great
river flows continuously.
Convoy for Escort. "A
man-of-war acted as convoy to the flotilla." The flotilla is the convoy,
the man-of-war the escort.
Couple for Two. For two things to be
a couple they must be of one general kind, and their number unimportant to the
statement made of them. It would be weak to say, "He gave me only one,
although he took a couple for himself." Couple expresses indifference to
the exact number, as does several. That is true, even in the phrase, a married
couple, for the number is carried in the adjective and needs no emphasis.
Created for First Performed. Stage
slang. "Burbage created the part of Hamlet." What was it that its
author did to it?
Critically for Seriously. "He
has long been critically ill." A patient is critically ill only at the
crisis of his disease.
Criticise for Condemn, or Disparage.
Criticism is not necessarily censorious; it may approve.
Cunning for Amusing. Usually said of
a child, or pet. This is pure Americanese, as is its synonym, "cute."
Curious for Odd, or Singular. To be
curious is to have an inquiring mind, or mood—curiosity.
Custom for Habit. Communities have
customs; individuals, habits—commonly bad ones.
Decease for Die.
Decidedly for Very, or Certainly.
"It is decidedly cold."
Declared for Said. To a newspaper
reporter no one seems ever to say anything; all "declare." Like
"alleged" (which see) the word is tiresome exceedingly.
Defalcation for Default. A
defalcation is a cutting off, a subtraction; a default is a failure in duty.
Definitely for Definitively.
"It was definitely decided." Definitely means precisely, with
exactness; definitively means finally, conclusively.
Deliver. "He delivered an
oration," or "delivered a lecture." Say, He made an oration, or
gave a lecture.
Demean for Debase or Degrade.
"He demeaned himself by accepting charity." The word relates, not to
meanness, but to demeanor, conduct, behavior. One may demean oneself with
dignity and credit.
Demise for Death. Usually said of a
person of note. Demise means the lapse, as by death, of some authority,
distinction or privilege, which passes to another than the one that held it; as
the demise of the Crown.
Democracy for Democratic Party. One
could as properly call the Christian Church "the Christianity."
Dépôt for Station. "Railroad
dépôt." A dépôt is a place of deposit; as, a dépôt of supply for an army.
Deprivation for Privation. "The
mendicant showed the effects of deprivation." Deprivation refers to the
act of depriving, taking away from; privation is the state of destitution, of
not having.
Dilapidated for Ruined. Said of a
building, or other structure. But the word is from the Latin lapis, a stone,
and cannot properly be used of any but a stone structure.
Directly for Immediately. "I
will come directly" means that I will come by the most direct route.
Dirt for Earth, Soil, or Gravel. A
most disagreeable Americanism, discredited by general (and Presidential) use.
"Make the dirt fly." Dirt means filth.
Distinctly for Distinctively.
"The custom is distinctly Oriental." Distinctly is plainly;
distinctively, in a way to distinguish one thing from others.
Donate for Give. Good American, but
not good English.
Doubtlessly. A doubly adverbial
form, like "illy."
Dress for Gown. Not so common as it
was a few years ago. Dress means the entire costume.
Each Other for One Another.
"The three looked at each other." That is, each looked at the other.
But there were more than one other; so we should say they looked at one
another, which means that each looked at another. Of two, say each other; of
more than two, one another.
Edify for Please, or Entertain.
Edify means to build; it has, therefore, the sense of uplift,
improvement—usually moral, or spiritual.
Electrocution. To one having even an
elementary knowledge of Latin grammar this word is no less than disgusting, and
the thing meant by it is felt to be altogether too good for the word's
inventor.
Empty for Vacant. Say, an empty
bottle; but, a vacant house.
Employé. Good French, but bad
English. Say, employee.
Endorse for Approve. To endorse is
to write upon the back of, or to sign the promissory note of another. It is a
commercial word, having insufficient dignity for literary use. You may endorse
a check, but you approve a policy, or statement.
Endways. A corruption of endwise.
Entitled for Authorized, Privileged.
"The man is not entitled to draw rations." Say, entitled to rations.
Entitled is not to be followed by an infinitive.
Episode for Occurrence, Event, etc.
Properly, an episode is a narrative that is a subordinate part of another
narrative. An occurrence considered by itself is not an episode.
Equally as for Equally. "This
is equally as good." Omit as. "He was of the same age, and equally as
tall." Say, equally tall.
Equivalent for Equal. "My
salary is equivalent to yours."
Essential for Necessary. This
solecism is common among the best writers of this country and England. "It
is essential to go early"; "Irrigation is essential to cultivation of
arid lands," and so forth. One thing is essential to another thing only if
it is of the essence of it—an important and indispensable part of it,
determining its nature; the soul of it.
Even for Exact. "An even
dozen."
Every for Entire, Full. "The
president had every confidence in him."
Every for Ever. "Every now and
then." This is nonsense: there can be no such thing as a now and then,
nor, of course, a number of now and thens. Now and then is itself bad enough,
reversing as it does the sequence of things, but it is idiomatic and there is
no quarreling with it. But "every" is here a corruption of ever,
meaning repeatedly, continually.
Ex. "Ex-President,"
"an ex-convict," and the like. Say, former. In England one may say,
Mr. Roosevelt, sometime President; though the usage is a trifle archaic.
Example for Problem. A heritage from
the text-books. "An example in arithmetic." An equally bad word for
the same thing is "sum": "Do the sum," for Solve the
problem.
Excessively for Exceedingly.
"The disease is excessively painful." "The weather is
excessively cold." Anything that is painful at all is excessively so. Even
a slight degree or small amount of what is disagreeable or injurious is
excessive—that is to say, redundant, superfluous, not required.
Executed. "The condemned man was
executed." He was hanged, or otherwise put to death; it is the sentence
that is executed.
Executive for Secret. An executive
session of a deliberative body is a session for executive business, as
distinguished from legislative. It is commonly secret, but a secret session is
not necessarily executive.
Expect for Believe, or Suppose.
"I expect he will go." Say, I believe (suppose or think) he will go;
or, I expect him to go.
Expectorate for Spit. The former
word is frequently used, even in laws and ordinances, as a euphemism for the
latter. It not only means something entirely different, but to one with a Latin
ear is far more offensive.
Experience for Suffer, or Undergo.
"The sinner experienced a change of heart." This will do if said
lightly or mockingly. It does not indicate a serious frame of mind in the
speaker.
Extend for Proffer. "He
extended an invitation." One does not always hold out an invitation in
one's hand; it may be spoken or sent.
Fail. "He failed to note the
hour." That implies that he tried to note it, but did not succeed. Failure
carries always the sense of endeavor; when there has been no endeavor there is
no failure. A falling stone cannot fail to strike you, for it does not try; but
a marksman firing at you may fail to hit you; and I hope he always will.
Favor for Resemble. "The child
favors its father."
Feel of for Feel. "The doctor
felt of the patient's head." "Smell of" and "taste of"
are incorrect too.
Feminine for Female. "A
feminine member of the club." Feminine refers, not to sex proper, but to
gender, which may be defined as the sex of words. The same is true of masculine.
Fetch for Bring. Fetching includes,
not only bringing, but going to get—going for and returning with. You may bring
what you did not go for.
Finances for Wealth, or Pecuniary
Resources.
Financial for Pecuniary. "His
financial reward"; "he is financially responsible," and so
forth.
Firstly. If this word could mean
anything it would mean firstlike, whatever that might mean. The ordinal numbers
should have no adverbial form: "firstly," "secondly," and
the rest are words without meaning.
Fix. This is, in America, a
word-of-all-work, most frequently meaning repair, or prepare. Do not so use it.
Forebears for Ancestors. The word is
sometimes spelled forbears, a worse spelling than the other, but not much. If
used at all it should be spelled forebeers, for it means those who have been
before. A forebe-er is one who fore-was. Considered in any way, it is a
senseless word.
Forecasted. For this abominable word
we are indebted to the weather bureau—at least it was not sent upon us until
that affliction was with us. Let us hope that it may some day be losted from
the language.
Former and Latter. Indicating the
first and the second of things previously named, these words are
unobjectionable if not too far removed from the names that they stand for. If
they are they confuse, for the reader has to look back to the names. Use them
sparingly.
Funeral Obsequies. Tautological.
Say, obsequies; the word is now used in none but a funereal sense.
Fully for Definitively, or Finally.
"After many preliminary examinations he was fully committed for
trial." The adverb is meaningless: a defendant is never partly committed
for trial. This is a solecism to which lawyers are addicted. And sometimes they
have been heard to say "fullied."
Funds for Money. "He was out of
funds." Funds are not money in general, but sums of money or credit
available for particular purposes.
Furnish for Provide, or Supply.
"Taxation furnished the money." A pauper may furnish a house if some
one will provide the furniture, or the money to buy it. "His flight
furnishes a presumption of guilt." It supplies it.
Generally for Usually. "The
winds are generally high." "A fool is generally vain." This
misuse of the word appears to come of abbreviating: Generally speaking, the
weather is bad. A fool, to speak generally, is vain.
Gent for Gentleman. Vulgar
exceedingly.
Genteel. This word, meaning polite,
or well mannered, was once in better repute than it is now, and its noun,
gentility, is still not infrequently found in the work of good writers. Genteel
is most often used by those who write, as the Scotchman of the anecdote
joked—wi' deeficulty.
Gentleman. It is not possible to
teach the correct use of this overworked word: one must be bred to it.
Everybody knows that it is not synonymous with man, but among the
"genteel" and those ambitious to be thought "genteel" it is
commonly so used in discourse too formal for the word "gent." To use
the word gentleman correctly, be one.
Genuine for Authentic, or Veritable.
"A genuine document," "a genuine surprise," and the like.
Given. "The soldier was given a
rifle." What was given is the rifle, not the soldier. "The house was
given a coat (coating) of paint." Nothing can be "given"
anything.
Goatee. In this country goatee is
frequently used for a tuft of beard on the point of the chin—what is sometimes
called "an imperial," apparently because the late Emperor Napoleon
III wore his beard so. His Majesty the Goat is graciously pleased to wear his
beneath the chin.
Got Married for Married. If this is
correct we should say, also, "got dead" for died; one expression is
as good as the other.
Gotten for Got. This has gone out of
good use, though in such compounded words as begotten and misbegotten it
persists respectably.
Graduated for Was Graduated.
Gratuitous for Unwarranted. "A
gratuitous assertion." Gratuitous means without cost.
Grueling. Used chiefly by newspaper
reporters; as, "He was subjected to a grueling cross-examination."
"It was grueling weather." Probably a corruption of grilling.
Gubernatorial. Eschew it; it is not
English, is needless and bombastic. Leave it to those who call a political
office a "chair." "Gubernatorial chair" is good enough for
them. So is hanging.
Had Better for Would Better. This is
not defensible as an idiom, as those who always used it before their attention
was directed to it take the trouble to point out. It comes of such contractions
as he'd for he would, I'd for I would. These clipped words are erroneously
restored as "he had," "I had." So we have such monstrosities
as "He had better beware," "I had better go."
Hail for Come. "He hails from
Chicago." This is sea speech, and comes from the custom of hailing passing
ships. It will not do for serious discourse.
Have Got for Have. "I have got
a good horse" directs attention rather to the act of getting than to the
state of having, and represents the capture as recently completed.
Head over Heels. A transposition of
words hardly less surprising than (to the person most concerned) the mischance
that it fails to describe. What is meant is heels over head.
Healthy for Wholesome. "A
healthy climate." "A healthy occupation." Only a living thing
can be healthy.
Helpmeet for Helpmate. In Genesis
Adam's wife is called "an help meet for him," that is, fit for him.
The ridiculous word appears to have had no other origin.
Hereafter for Henceforth. Hereafter
means at some time in the future; henceforth, always in the future. The
penitent who promises to be good hereafter commits himself to the performance
of a single good act, not to a course of good conduct.
Honeymoon. Moon here means month, so
it is incorrect to say, "a week's honeymoon," or, "Their
honeymoon lasted a year."
Horseflesh for Horses. A singularly
senseless and disagreeable word which, when used, as it commonly is, with
reference to hippophilism, savors rather more of the spit than of the spirit.
Humans as a Noun. We have no single
word having the general yet limited meaning that this is sometimes used to
express—a meaning corresponding to that of the word animals, as the word men
would if it included women and children. But there is time enough to use two
words.
Hung for Hanged. A bell, or a
curtain, is hung, but a man is hanged. Hung is the junior form of the
participle, and is now used for everything but man. Perhaps it is our reverence
for the custom of hanging men that sacredly preserves the elder form—as some,
even, of the most zealous American spelling reformers still respect the u in
Saviour.
Hurry for Haste and Hasten. To hurry
is to hasten in a more or less disorderly manner. Hurry is misused, also, in
another sense: "There is no hurry"—meaning, There is no reason for
haste.
Hurt for Harm. "It does no
hurt." To be hurt is to feel pain, but one may be harmed without knowing
it. To spank a child, or flout a fool, hurts without harming.
Idea for Thought, Purpose,
Expectation, etc. "I had no idea that it was so cold." "When he
went abroad it was with no idea of remaining."
Identified with. "He is closely
identified with the temperance movement." Say, connected.
Ilk for Kind. "Men of that
ilk." This Scotch word has a narrowly limited and specific meaning. It
relates to an ancestral estate having the same name as the person spoken of.
Macdonald of that ilk means, Macdonald of Macdonald. The phrase quoted above is
without meaning.
Illy for Ill. There is no such word
as illy, for ill itself is an adverb.
Imaginary Line. The adjective is
needless. Geometrically, every line is imaginary; its graphic representation is
a mark. True the text-books say, draw a line, but in a mathematical sense the
line already exists; the drawing only makes its course visible.
In for Into. "He was put in
jail." "He went in the house." A man may be in jail, or be in a
house, but when the act of entrance—the movement of something from the outside
to the inside of another thing—is related the correct word is into if the
latter thing is named.
Inaugurate for Begin, Establish,
etc. Inauguration implies some degree of formality and ceremony.
Incumbent for Obligatory. "It
was incumbent upon me to relieve him." Infelicitous and work-worn. Say, It
was my duty, or, if enamored of that particular metaphor, It lay upon me.
Individual. As a noun, this word means
something that cannot be considered as divided, a unit. But it is incorrect to
call a man, woman or child an individual, except with reference to mankind, to
society or to a class of persons. It will not do to say, "An individual
stood in the street," when no mention nor allusion has been made, nor is
going to be made, to some aggregate of individuals considered as a whole.
Indorse. See Endorse.
Insane Asylum. Obviously an asylum
cannot be unsound in mind. Say, asylum for the insane.
In Spite of. In most instances it is
better to say despite.
Inside of. Omit the preposition.
Insignificant for Trivial, or Small.
Insignificant means not signifying anything, and should be used only in
contrast, expressed or implied, with something that is important for what it
implies. The bear's tail may be insignificant to a naturalist tracing the
animal's descent from an earlier species, but to the rest of us, not concerned
with the matter, it is merely small.
Insoluble for Unsolvable. Use the
former word for material substances, the latter for problems.
Inst., Prox., Ult. These
abbreviations of instante mense (in the present month), proximo mense (in the
next month) and ultimo mense (in the last month), are serviceable enough in
commercial correspondence, but, like A.M., P.M. and many other contractions of
Latin words, could profitably be spared from literature.
Integrity for Honesty. The word
means entireness, wholeness. It may be rightly used to affirm possession of all
the virtues, that is, unity of moral character.
Involve for Entail. "Proof of
the charges will involve his dismissal." Not at all; it will entail it. To
involve is, literally, to infold, not to bring about, nor cause to ensue. An
unofficial investigation, for example, may involve character and reputation,
but the ultimate consequence is entailed. A question, in the parliamentary
sense, may involve a principle; its settlement one way or another may entail
expense, or injury to interests. An act may involve one's honor and entail
disgrace.
It for So. "Going into the
lion's cage is dangerous; you should not do it." Do so is the better
expression, as a rule, for the word it is a pronoun, meaning a thing, or
object, and therefore incapable of being done. Colloquially we may say do it,
or do this, or do that, but in serious written discourse greater precision is
desirable, and is better obtained, in most cases, by use of the adverb.
Item for Brief Article. Commonly
used of a narrative in a newspaper. Item connotes an aggregate of which it is a
unit—one thing of many. Hence it suggests more than we may wish to direct attention
to.
Jackies for Sailors. Vulgar, and
especially offensive to seamen.
Jeopardize for Imperil, or Endanger.
The correct word is jeopard, but in any case there is no need for anything so
farfetched and stilted.
Juncture. Juncture means a joining, a
junction; its use to signify a time, however critical a time, is absurd.
"At this juncture the woman screamed." In reading that account of it
we scream too.
Just Exactly. Nothing is gained in
strength nor precision by this kind of pleonasm. Omit just.
Juvenile for Child. This needless
use of the adjective for the noun is probably supposed to be humorous, like
"canine" for dog, "optic" for eye, "anatomy" for
body, and the like. Happily the offense is not very common.
Kind of a for Kind of. "He was
that kind of a man." Say that kind of man. Man here is generic, and a
genus comprises many kinds. But there cannot be more than one kind of one
thing. Kind of followed by an adjective, as, "kind of good," is
almost too gross for censure.
Landed Estate for Property in Land.
Dreadful!
Last and Past. "Last
week." "The past week." Neither is accurate: a week cannot be
the last if another is already begun; and all weeks except this one are past.
Here two wrongs seem to make a right: we can say the week last past. But will
we? I trow not.
Later on. On is redundant; say,
later.
Laundry. Meaning a place where
clothing is washed, this word cannot mean, also, clothing sent there to be
washed.
Lay (to place) for Lie (to recline).
"The ship lays on her side." A more common error is made in the past
tense, as, "He laid down on the grass." The confusion comes of the
identity of a present tense of the transitive verb to lay and the past tense of
the intransitive verb to lie.
Leading Question. A leading question
is not necessarily an important one; it is one that is so framed as to suggest,
or lead to, the answer desired. Few others than lawyers use the term correctly.
Lease. To say of a man that he
leases certain premises leaves it doubtful whether he is lessor or lessee.
Being ambiguous, the word should be used with caution.
Leave for Go away. "He left
yesterday." Leave is a transitive verb; name the place of departure.
Leave for Let. "Leave it
alone." By this many persons mean, not that it is to be left in solitude,
but that it is to be untouched, or unmolested.
Lengthways for Lengthwise.
Lengthy. Usually said in
disparagement of some wearisome discourse. It is no better than breadthy, or
thicknessy.
Leniency for Lenity. The words are
synonymous, but the latter is the better.
Less for Fewer. "The regiment
had less than five hundred men." Less relates to quantity, fewer, to
number.
Limited for Small, Inadequate, etc.
"The army's operations were confined to a limited area." "We had
a limited supply of food." A large area and an adequate supply would also
be limited. Everything that we know about is limited.
Liable for Likely. "Man is
liable to err." Man is not liable to err, but to error. Liable should be
followed, not by an infinitive, but by a preposition.
Like for As, or As if. "The
matter is now like it was." "The house looked like it would
fall."
Likely for Probably. "He will
likely be elected." If likely is thought the better word (and in most cases
it is) put it this way: "It is likely that he will be elected," or,
"He is likely to be elected."
Line for Kind, or Class. "This
line of goods." Leave the word to "salesladies" and
"salesgentlemen." "That line of business." Say, that
business.
Literally for Figuratively.
"The stream was literally alive with fish." "His eloquence
literally swept the audience from its feet." It is bad enough to
exaggerate, but to affirm the truth of the exaggeration is intolerable.
Loan for Lend. "I loaned him
ten dollars." We lend, but the act of lending, or, less literally, the
thing lent, is a loan.
Locate. "After many removals
the family located at Smithville." Some dictionaries give locate as an
intransitive verb having that meaning, but—well, dictionaries are funny.
Lots, or a Lot, for Much, or Many.
"Lots of things." "A lot of talk."
Love for Like. "I love to
travel." "I love apples." Keep the stronger word for a stronger
feeling.
Lunch for Luncheon. But do not use
luncheon as a verb.
Mad for Angry. An Americanism of
lessening prevalence. It is probable that anger is a kind of madness
(insanity), but that is not what the misusers of the word mad mean to affirm.
Maintain for Contend. "The
senator maintained that the tariff was iniquitous." He maintained it only
if he proved it.
Majority for Plurality. Concerning
votes cast in an election, a majority is more than half the total; a plurality
is the excess of one candidate's votes over another's. Commonly the votes
compared are those for the successful candidate and those for his most nearly
successful competitor.
Make for Earn. "He makes fifty
dollars a month by manual labor."
Mansion for Dwelling, or House.
Usually mere hyperbole, a lamentable fault of our national literature. Even our
presidents, before Roosevelt, called their dwelling the Executive Mansion.
Masculine for Male. See Feminine.
Mend for Repair. "They mended
the road." To mend is to repair, but to repair is not always to mend. A
stocking is mended, a road repaired.
Meet for Meeting. This belongs to
the language of sport, which persons of sense do not write—nor read.
Militate. "Negligence militates
against success." If "militate" meant anything it would mean
fight, but there is no such word.
Mind for Obey. This is a reasonless
extension of one legitimate meaning of mind, namely, to heed, to give
attention.
Minus for Lacking, or Without.
"After the battle he was minus an ear." It is better in serious
composition to avoid such alien words as have vernacular equivalents.
Mistaken for Mistake. "You are
mistaken." For whom? Say, You mistake.
Monarch for King, Emperor, or
Sovereign. Not only hyperbolical, but inaccurate. There is not a monarch in
Christendom.
Moneyed for Wealthy. "The
moneyed men of New York." One might as sensibly say, "The cattled men
of Texas," or, "The lobstered men of the fish market."
Most for Almost. "The apples
are most all gone." "The returning travelers were most home."
Moved for Removed. "The family
has moved to another house." "The Joneses were moving."
Mutual. By this word we express a
reciprocal relation. It implies exchange, a giving and taking, not a mere
possessing in common. There can be a mutual affection, or a mutual hatred, but
not a mutual friend, nor a mutual horse.
Name for Title and Name. "His
name was Mr. Smith." Surely no babe was ever christened Mister.
Necessaries for Means. "Bread
and meat are necessaries of life." Not so; they are the mere means, for
one can, and many do, live comfortably without them. Food and drink are
necessaries of life, but particular kinds of food and drink are not.
Necessities for Necessaries.
"Necessities of life are those things without which we cannot live."
Née. Feminine of né, born.
"Mrs. Jones, née Lucy Smith." She could hardly have been christened
before her birth. If you must use the French word say, née Smith.
Negotiate. From the Latin negotium.
It means, as all know, to fix the terms for a transaction, to bargain. But when
we say, "The driver negotiated a difficult turn of the road," or,
"The chauffeur negotiated a hill," we speak nonsense.
Neither—or for Neither—nor.
"Neither a cat or fish has wool." Always after neither use nor.
New Beginner for Beginner.
Nice for Good, or Agreeable. "A
nice girl." Nice means fastidious, delicately discriminative, and the
like. Pope uses the word admirably of a dandy who was skilled in the nice
conduct [management] of a clouded cane.
Noise for Sound. "A noise like
a flute"; "a noise of twittering birds," etc. A noise is a loud
or disagreeable sound, or combination or succession of sounds.
None. Usually, and in most cases,
singular; as, None has come. But it is not singular because it always means not
one, for frequently it does not, as, The bottle was full of milk, but none is
left. When it refers to numbers, not quantity, popular usage stubbornly insists
that it is plural, and at least one respectable authority says that as a
singular it is offensive. One is sorry to be offensive to a good man.
No Use. "He tried to smile, but
it was no use." Say, of no use, or, less colloquially, in vain.
Novel for Romance. In a novel there
is at least an apparent attention to considerations of probability; it is a
narrative of what might occur. Romance flies with a free wing and owns no
allegiance to likelihood. Both are fiction, both works of imagination, but
should not be confounded. They are as distinct as beast and bird.
Numerous for Many. Rightly used,
numerous relates to numbers, but does not imply a great number. A correct use
is seen in the term numerous verse—verse consisting of poetic numbers; that is,
rhythmical feet.
Obnoxious for Offensive. Obnoxious
means exposed to evil. A soldier in battle is obnoxious to danger.
Occasion for Induce, or Cause.
"His arrival occasioned a great tumult." As a verb, the word is
needless and unpleasing.
Occasional Poems. These are not, as
so many authors and compilers seem to think, poems written at irregular and
indefinite intervals, but poems written for occasions, such as anniversaries,
festivals, celebrations and the like.
Of Any for Of All. "The greatest
poet of any that we have had."
Offhanded and Offhandedly. Offhand
is both adjective and adverb; these are bastard forms.
On the Street. A street comprises
the roadway and the buildings at each side. Say, in the street. He lives in
Broadway.
One Another for Each Other. See Each
Other.
Only. "He only had one."
Say, He had only one, or, better, one only. The other sentence might be taken
to mean that only he had one; that, indeed, is what it distinctly says. The
correct placing of only in a sentence requires attention and skill.
Opine for Think. The word is not
very respectably connected.
Opposite for Contrary. "I hold
the opposite opinion." "The opposite practice."
Or for Nor. Probably our most nearly
universal solecism. "I cannot see the sun or the moon." This means
that I am unable to see one of them, though I may see the other. By using nor,
I affirm the invisibility of both, which is what I wanted to do. If a man is
not white or black he may nevertheless be a Negro or a Caucasian; but if he is not
white nor black he belongs to some other race. See Neither.
Ordinarily for Usually. Clumsy.
Ovation. In ancient Rome an ovation
was an inferior triumph accorded to victors in minor wars or unimportant
battle. Its character and limitations, like those of the triumph, were strictly
defined by law and custom. An enthusiastic demonstration in honor of an
American civilian is nothing like that, and should not be called by its name.
Over for About, In, or Concerning.
"Don't cry over spilt milk." "He rejoiced over his
acquittal."
Over for More than. "A sum of
over ten thousand dollars." "Upward of ten thousand dollars" is
equally objectionable.
Over for On. "The policeman
struck him over the head." If the blow was over the head it did not hit
him.
Over with. "Let us have it over
with." Omit with. A better expression is, Let us get done with it.
Outside of. Omit the preposition.
Pair for Pairs. If a word has a good
plural use each form in its place.
Pants for Trousers. Abbreviated from
pantaloons, which are no longer worn. Vulgar exceedingly.
Partially for Partly. A dictionary
word, to swell the book.
Party for Person. "A party
named Brown." The word, used in that sense, has the excuse that it is a
word. Otherwise it is no better than "pants" and "gent." A
person making an agreement, however, is a party to that agreement.
Patron for Customer.
Pay for Give, Make, etc. "He
pays attention." "She paid a visit to Niagara." It is
conceivable that one may owe attention or a visit to another person, but one
cannot be indebted to a place.
Pay. "Laziness does not
pay." "It does not pay to be uncivil." This use of the word is
grossly commercial. Say, Indolence is unprofitable. There is no advantage in
incivility.
Peek for Peep. Seldom heard in
England, though common here. "I peeked out through the curtain and saw
him." That it is a variant of peep is seen in the child's word peek-a-boo,
equivalent to bo-peep. Better use the senior word.
Peculiar for Odd, or Unusual. Also
sometimes used to denote distinction, or particularity. Properly a thing is
peculiar only to another thing, of which it is characteristic, nothing else
having it; as knowledge of the use of fire is peculiar to Man.
People for Persons. "Three
people were killed." "Many people are superstitious." People has
retained its parity of meaning with the Latin populus, whence it comes, and the
word is not properly used except to designate a population, or large fractions
of it considered in the mass. To speak of any stated or small number of persons
as people is incorrect.
Per. "Five dollars per
day." "Three per hundred." Say, three dollars a day; three in a
hundred. If you must use the Latin preposition use the Latin noun too: per
diem; per centum.
Perpetually for Continually.
"The child is perpetually asking questions." What is done perpetually
is done continually and forever.
Phenomenal for Extraordinary, or
Surprising. Everything that occurs is phenomenal, for all that we know about is
phenomena, appearances. Of realities, noumena, we are ignorant.
Plead (pronounced "pled")
for Pleaded. "He plead guilty."
Plenty for Plentiful. "Fish and
fowl were plenty."
Poetess. A foolish word, like
"authoress."
Poetry for Verse. Not all verse is
poetry; not all poetry is verse. Few persons can know, or hope to know, the one
from the other, but he who has the humility to doubt (if such a one there be)
should say verse if the composition is metrical.
Point Blank. "He fired at him
point blank." This usually is intended to mean directly, or at short range.
But point blank means the point at which the line of sight is crossed downward
by the trajectory—the curve described by the missile.
Poisonous for Venomous. Hemlock is
poisonous, but a rattlesnake is venomous.
Politics. The word is not plural
because it happens to end with s.
Possess for Have. "To possess
knowledge is to possess power." Possess is lacking in naturalness and
unduly emphasizes the concept of ownership.
Practically for Virtually. This
error is very common. "It is practically conceded." "The decision
was practically unanimous." "The panther and the cougar are
practically the same animal." These and similar misapplications of the
word are virtually without excuse.
Predicate for Found, or Base.
"I predicate my argument on universal experience." What is predicated
of something is affirmed as an attribute of it, as omnipotence is predicated of
the Deity.
Prejudice for Prepossession.
Literally, a prejudice is merely a prejudgment—a decision before evidence—and
may be favorable or unfavorable, but it is so much more frequently used in the
latter sense than in the former that clarity is better got by the other word
for reasonless approval.
Preparedness for Readiness. An
awkward and needless word much used in discussion of national armaments, as,
"Our preparedness for war."
Preside. "Professor
Swackenhauer presided at the piano." "The deviled crab table was
presided over by Mrs. Dooley." How would this sound? "The ginger pop
stand was under the administration of President Woolwit, and Professor Sooffle
presided at the flute."
Pretend for Profess. "I do not
pretend to be infallible." Of course not; one does not care to confess
oneself a pretender. To pretend is to try to deceive; one may profess quite
honestly.
Preventative for Preventive. No such
word as preventative.
Previous for Previously. "The
man died previous to receipt of the letter."
Prior to for Before. Stilted.
Propose for Purpose, or Intend.
"I propose to go to Europe." A mere intention is not a proposal.
Proposition for Proposal. "He made
a proposition." In current slang almost anything is a proposition. A
difficult enterprise is "a tough proposition," an agile wrestler,
"a slippery proposition," and so forth.
Proportions for Dimensions. "A
rock of vast proportions." Proportions relate to form; dimensions to
magnitude.
Proven for Proved. Good Scotch, but
bad English.
Proverbial for Familiar. "The
proverbial dog in the manger." The animal is not "proverbial"
for it is not mentioned in a proverb, but in a fable.
Quit for Cease, Stop. "Jones
promises to quit drinking." In another sense, too, the word is commonly
misused, as, "He has quit the town." Say, quitted.
Quite. "She is quite
charming." If it is meant that she is entirely charming this is right, but
usually the meaning intended to be conveyed is less than that—that she is
rather, or somewhat, charming.
Raise for Bring up, Grow, Breed,
etc. In this country a word-of-all-work: "raise children,"
"raise wheat," "raise cattle." Children are brought up,
grain, hay and vegetables are grown, animals and poultry are bred.
Real for Really, or Very. "It
is real good of him." "The weather was real cold."
Realize for Conceive, or Comprehend.
"I could not realize the situation." Writers caring for precision use
this word in the sense of to make real, not to make seem real. A dream seems
real, but is actually realized when made to come true.
Recollect for Remember. To remember
is to have in memory; to recollect is to recall what has escaped from memory.
We remember automatically; in recollecting we make a conscious effort.
Redeem for Retrieve. "He
redeemed his good name." Redemption (Latin redemptio, from re and dimere)
is allied to ransom, and carries the sense of buying back; whereas to retrieve
is merely to recover what was lost.
Redound for Conduce. "A man's
honesty redounds to his advantage." We make a better use of the word if we
say of one (for example) who has squandered a fortune, that its loss redounds
to his advantage, for the word denotes a fluctuation, as from seeming evil to
actual good; as villification may direct attention to one's excellent
character.
Refused. "He was refused a
crown." It is the crown that was refused to him. See Given.
Regular for Natural, or Customary.
"Flattery of the people is the demagogue's regular means to political
preferment." Regular properly relates to a rule (regula) more definite
than the law of antecedent and consequent.
Reliable for Trusty, or Trustworthy.
A word not yet admitted to the vocabulary of the fastidious, but with a strong
backing for the place.
Remit for Send. "On receiving
your bill I will remit the money." Remit does not mean that; it means give
back, yield up, relinquish, etc. It means, also, to cancel, as in the phrase,
the remission of sins.
Rendition for Interpretation, or Performance.
"The actor's rendition of the part was good." Rendition means a
surrender, or a giving back.
Reportorial. A vile word, improperly
made. It assumes the Latinized spelling, "reporter." The Romans had
not the word, for they were, fortunately for them, without the thing.
Repudiate for Deny. "He
repudiated the accusation."
Reside for Live. "They reside
in Hohokus." Stilted.
Residence for Dwelling, or House.
See Mansion.
Respect for Way, or Matter.
"They were alike in that respect." The misuse comes of abbreviating:
the sentence properly written might be, They were alike in respect of
that—i.e., with regard to that. The word in the bad sense has even been
pluralized: "In many respects it is admirable."
Respective. "They went to their
respective homes." The adjective here (if an adjective is thought
necessary) should be several. In the adverbial form the word is properly used
in the sentence following: John and James are bright and dull, respectively.
That is, John is bright and James dull.
Responsible. "The bad weather
is responsible for much sickness." "His intemperance was responsible
for his crime." Responsibility is not an attribute of anything but human
beings, and few of these can respond, in damages or otherwise. Responsible is
nearly synonymous with accountable and answerable, which, also, are frequently
misused.
Restive for Restless. These words
have directly contrary meanings; the dictionaries' disallowance of their
identity would be something to be thankful for, but that is a dream.
Retire for Go to Bed. English of the
"genteel" sort. See Genteel.
Rev. for The Rev. "Rev. Dr.
Smith."
Reverence for Revere.
Ride for Drive. On horseback one
does drive, and in a vehicle one does ride, but a distinction is needed here,
as in England; so, here as there, we may profitably make it, riding in the
saddle and driving in the carriage.
Roomer for Lodger. See Bedder and
Mealer—if you can find them.
Round for About. "They stood
round." See Around.
Ruination for Ruin. Questionably
derived and problematically needful.
Run for Manage, or Conduct.
Vulgar—hardly better than slang.
Say for Voice. "He had no say
in determining the matter." Vulgar.
Scholar for Student, or Pupil. A
scholar is a person who is learned, not a person who is learning.
Score for Win, Obtain, etc. "He
scored an advantage over his opponent." To score is not to win a point,
but to record it.
Second-handed for Second-hand. There
is no such word.
Secure for Procure. "He secured
a position as book-keeper." "The dwarf secured a stick and guarded
the jewels that he had found." Then it was the jewels that were secured.
Seldom ever. A most absurd locution.
Self-confessed. "A
self-confessed assassin." Self is superfluous: one's sins cannot be
confessed by another.
Sensation for Emotion. "The
play caused a great sensation." "A sensational newspaper." A
sensation is a physical feeling; an emotion, a mental. Doubtless the one
usually accompanies the other, but the good writer will name the one that he
has in mind, not the other. There are few errors more common than the one here
noted.
Sense for Smell. "She sensed
the fragrance of roses." Society English.
Set for Sit. "A setting
hen."
Settee for Settle. This word belongs
to the peasantry of speech.
Settle for Pay. "Settle the
bill." "I shall take it now and settle for it later."
Shades for Shade. "Shades of
Noah! how it rained!" "O shades of Caesar!" A shade is a
departed soul, as conceived by the ancients; one to each mortal part is the
proper allowance.
Show for Chance, or Opportunity.
"He didn't stand a show." Say, He had no chance.
Sick for Ill. Good usage now limits
this word to cases of nausea, but it is still legitimate in sickly, sickness,
love-sick, and the like.
Side for Agree, or Stand. "I
side with the Democrats." "He always sided with what he thought
right."
Sideburns for Burnsides. A form of
whiskers named from a noted general of the civil war, Ambrose E. Burnside. It
seems to be thought that the word side has something to do with it, and that as
an adjective it should come first, according to our idiom.
Side-hill for Hillside. A reasonless
transposition for which it is impossible to assign a cause, unless it is
abbreviated from side o' the hill.
Sideways for Sidewise. See Endways.
Since for Ago. "He came here
not long since and died."
Smart for Bright, or Able. An
Americanism that is dying out. But "smart" has recently come into use
for fashionable, which is almost as bad.
Snap for Period (of time) or Spell.
"A cold snap." This is a word of incomprehensible origin in that
sense; we can know only that its parents were not respectable.
"Spell" is itself not very well-born.
So—as. See As—as.
So for True. "If you see it in
the Daily Livercomplaint it is so." "Is that so?" Colloquial and
worse.
Solemnize. This word rightly means
to make solemn, not to perform, or celebrate, ceremoniously something already
solemn, as a marriage, or a mass. We have no exact synonym, but this explains,
rather than justifies, its use.
Some for Somewhat. "He was hurt
some."
Soon for Willingly. "I would as
soon go as stay." "That soldier would sooner eat than fight."
Say, rather eat.
Space for Period. "A long space
of time." Space is so different a thing from time that the two do not go
well together.
Spend for Pass. "We shall spend
the summer in Europe." Spend denotes a voluntary relinquishment, but time
goes from us against our will.
Square for Block. "He lives
three squares away." A city block is seldom square.
Squirt for Spurt. Absurd.
Stand and Stand for for Endure.
"The patient stands pain well." "He would not stand for
misrepresentation."
Standpoint for Point of View, or
Viewpoint.
State for Say. "He stated that
he came from Chicago." "It is stated that the president is
angry." We state a proposition, or a principle, but say that we are well.
And we say our prayers—some of us.
Still Continue. "The rain still
continues." Omit still; it is contained in the other word.
Stock. "I take no stock in
it." Disagreeably commercial. Say, I have no faith in it. Many such
metaphorical expressions were unobjectionable, even pleasing, in the mouth of
him who first used them, but by constant repetition by others have become mere
slang, with all the offensiveness of plagiarism. The prime objectionableness of
slang is its hideous lack of originality. Until mouth-worn it is not slang.
Stop for Stay. "Prayer will not
stop the ravages of cholera." Stop is frequently misused for stay in
another sense of the latter word: "He is stopping at the hotel."
Stopping is not a continuing act; one cannot be stopping who has already
stopped.
Stunt. A word recently introduced
and now overworked, meaning a task, or performance in one's trade, or
calling,—doubtless a variant of stint, without that word's suggestion of
allotment and limitation. It is still in the reptilian stage of evolution.
Subsequent for Later, or Succeeding.
Legitimate enough, but ugly and needless. "He was subsequently
hanged." Say, afterward.
Substantiate for Prove. Why?
Success. "The project was a
success." Say, was successful. Success should not have the indefinite
article.
Such Another for Another Such. There
is illustrious authority for this—in poetry. Poets are a lawless folk, and may
do as they please so long as they do please.
Such for So. "He had such weak
legs that he could not stand." The absurdity of this is made obvious by
changing the form of the statement: "His legs were such weak that he could
not stand." If the word is an adverb in the one sentence it is in the
other. "He is such a great bore that none can endure him." Say, so
great a bore.
Suicide. This is never a verb.
"He suicided." Say, He killed himself, or He took his own life. See
Commit Suicide.
Supererogation. To supererogate is
to overpay, or to do more than duty requires. But the excess must be in the
line of duty; merely needless and irrelevant action is not supererogation. The
word is not a natural one, at best.
Sure for Surely. "They will
come, sure." Slang.
Survive for Live, or Persist.
Survival is an outliving, or outlasting of something else. "The custom survives"
is wrong, but a custom may survive its utility. Survive is a transitive verb.
Sustain for Incur. "He
sustained an injury." "He sustained a broken neck." That means that
although his neck was broken he did not yield to the mischance.
Talented for Gifted. These are both
past participles, but there was once the verb to gift, whereas there was never
the verb "to talent." If Nature did not talent a person the person is
not talented.
Tantamount for Equivalent.
"Apology is tantamount to confession." Let this ugly word alone; it
is not only illegitimate, but ludicrously suggests catamount.
Tasty for Tasteful. Vulgar.
Tear Down for Pull Down. "The
house was torn down." This is an indigenous solecism; they do not say so
in England.
Than Whom. See Whom.
The. A little word that is terribly
overworked. It is needlessly affixed to names of most diseases: "the
cholera," "the smallpox," "the scarlet fever," and
such. Some escape it: we do not say, "the sciatica," nor "the
locomotor ataxia." It is too common in general propositions, as, "The
payment of interest is the payment of debt." "The virtues that are
automatic are the best." "The tendency to falsehood should be
checked." "Kings are not under the control of the law." It is
impossible to note here all forms of this misuse, but a page of almost any book
will supply abundant instance. We do not suffer so abject slavery to the
definite article as the French, but neither do we manifest their spirit of
rebellion by sometimes cutting off the oppressor's tail. One envies the Romans,
who had no article, definite or indefinite.
The Following. "Washington
wrote the following." The following what? Put in the noun. "The
following animals are ruminants." It is not the animals that follow, but
their names.
The Same. "They cooked the
flesh of the lion and ate the same." "An old man lived in a cave, and
the same was a cripple." In humorous composition this may do, though it is
not funny; but in serious work use the regular pronoun.
Then as an Adjective. "The then
governor of the colony." Say, the governor of the colony at that time.
Those Kind for That Kind.
"Those kind of things." Almost too absurd for condemnation, and
happily not very common out of the class of analphabets.
Though for If. "She wept as
though her heart was broken." Many good writers, even some devoid of the
lexicographers' passion for inclusion and approval, have specifically defended
this locution, backing their example by their precept. Perhaps it is a question
of taste; let us attend their cry and pass on.
Thrifty for Thriving. "A
thrifty village." To thrive is an end; thrift is a means to that end.
Through for Done. "The lecturer
is through talking." "I am through with it." Say, I have done
with it.
To. As part of an infinitive it
should not be separated from the other part by an adverb, as, "to hastily
think," for hastily to think, or, to think hastily. Condemnation of the
split infinitive is now pretty general, but it is only recently that any one
seems to have thought of it. Our forefathers and we elder writers of this
generation used it freely and without shame—perhaps because it had not a name,
and our crime could not be pointed out without too much explanation.
To for At. "We have been to
church," "I was to the theater." One can go to a place, but one
cannot be to it.
Total. "The figures totaled
10,000." Say, The total of the figures was 10,000.
Transaction for Action, or Incident.
"The policeman struck the man with his club, but the transaction was not
reported." "The picking of a pocket is a criminal transaction."
In a transaction two or more persons must have an active or assenting part; as,
a business transaction, Transactions of the Geographical Society, etc. The
Society's action would be better called Proceedings.
Transpire for Occur, Happen, etc.
"This event transpired in 1906." Transpire (trans, through, and
spirare, to breathe) means leak out, that is, become known. What transpired in
1906 may have occurred long before.
Trifling for Trivial. "A
trifling defect"; "a trifling error."
Trust for Wealthy Corporation. There
are few trusts; capitalists have mostly abandoned the trust form of
combination.
Try an Experiment. An experiment is
a trial; we cannot try a trial. Say, make.
Try and for Try to. "I will try
and see him." This plainly says that my effort to see him will
succeed—which I cannot know and do not wish to affirm. "Please try and
come." This colloquial slovenliness of speech is almost universal in this
country, but freedom of speech is one of our most precious possessions.
Ugly for Ill-natured, Quarrelsome.
What is ugly is the temper, or disposition, not the person having it.
Under-handed and Under-handedly for
Under-hand. See Off-handed.
Unique. "This is very
unique." "The most unique house in the city." There are no degrees
of uniqueness: a thing is unique if there is not another like it. The word has
nothing to do with oddity, strangeness, nor picturesqueness.
United States as a Singular Noun.
"The United States is for peace." The fact that we are in some ways
one nation has nothing to do with it; it is enough to know that the word States
is plural—if not, what is State? It would be pretty hard on a foreigner skilled
in the English tongue if he could not venture to use our national name without
having made a study of the history of our Constitution and political
institutions. Grammar has not a speaking acquaintance with politics, and
patriotic pride is not schoolmaster to syntax.
Unkempt for Disordered, Untidy, etc.
Unkempt means uncombed, and can properly be said of nothing but the hair.
Use for Treat. "The inmates
were badly used." "They use him harshly."
Utter for Absolute, Entire, etc.
Utter has a damnatory signification and is to be used of evil things only. It
is correct to say utter misery, but not "utter happiness;" utterly
bad, but not "utterly good."
Various for Several. "Various
kinds of men." Kinds are various of course, for they vary—that is what makes
them kinds. Use various only when, in speaking of a number of things, you wish
to direct attention to their variety—their difference, one from another.
"The dividend was distributed among the various stockholders." The
stockholders vary, as do all persons, but that is irrelevant and was not in
mind. "Various persons have spoken to me of you." Their variation is
unimportant; what is meant is that there was a small indefinite number of them;
that is, several.
Ventilate for Express, Disclose,
etc. "The statesman ventilated his views." A disagreeable and
dog-eared figure of speech.
Verbal for Oral. All language is
verbal, whether spoken or written, but audible speech is oral. "He did not
write, but communicated his wishes verbally." It would have been a verbal
communication, also, if written.
Vest for Waistcoat. This is
American, but as all Americans are not in agreement about it it is better to
use the English word.
Vicinity for Vicinage, or
Neighborhood. "He lives in this vicinity." If neither of the other
words is desired say, He lives in the vicinity of this place, or, better, He
lives near by.
View of. "He invested with the
view of immediate profit." "He enlisted with the view of
promotion." Say, with a view to.
Vulgar for Immodest, Indecent. It is
from vulgus, the common people, the mob, and means both common and unrefined,
but has no relation to indecency.
Way for Away. "Way out at
sea." "Way down South."
Ways for Way. "A squirrel ran a
little ways along the road." "The ship looked a long ways off."
This surprising word calls loudly for depluralization.
Wed for Wedded. "They were wed
at noon." "He wed her in Boston." The word wed in all its forms
as a substitute for marry, is pretty hard to bear.
Well. As a mere meaningless prelude
to a sentence this word is overtasked. "Well, I don't know about
that." "Well, you may try." "Well, have your own way."
Wet for Wetted. See Bet.
Where for When. "Where there is
reason to expect criticism write discreetly."
Which for That. "The boat which
I engaged had a hole in it." But a parenthetical clause may rightly be
introduced by which; as, The boat, which had a hole in it, I nevertheless
engaged. Which and that are seldom interchangeable; when they are, use that. It
sounds better.
Whip for Chastise, or Defeat. To
whip is to beat with a whip. It means nothing else.
Whiskers for Beard. The whisker is
that part of the beard that grows on the cheek. See Chin Whiskers.
Who for Whom. "Who do you take
me for?"
Whom for Who. "The man whom
they thought was dead is living." Here the needless introduction of was
entails the alteration of whom to who. "Remember whom it is that you speak
of." "George Washington, than whom there was no greater man, loved a
jest." The misuse of whom after than is almost universal. Who and whom
trip up many a good writer, although, unlike which and who, they require
nothing but knowledge of grammar.
Widow Woman. Omit woman.
Will and Shall. Proficiency in the
use of these apparently troublesome words must be sought in text-books on
grammar and rhetoric, where the subject will be found treated with a more
particular attention, and at greater length, than is possible in a book of the
character of this. Briefly and generally, in the first person, a mere intention
is indicated by shall, as, I shall go; whereas will denotes some degree of
compliance or determination, as, I will go—as if my going had been requested or
forbidden. In the second and the third person, will merely forecasts, as, You
(or he) will go; but shall implies something of promise, permission or
compulsion by the speaker, as, You (or he) shall go. Another and less obvious
compulsion—that of circumstance—speaks in shall, as sometimes used with good
effect: In Germany you shall not turn over a chip without uncovering a philosopher.
The sentence is barely more than indicative, shall being almost, but not quite,
equivalent to can.
Win out. Like its antithesis,
"lose out," this reasonless phrase is of sport, "sporty."
Win for Won. "I went to the
race and win ten dollars." This atrocious solecism seems to be unknown
outside the world of sport, where may it ever remain.
Without for Unless. "I cannot
go without I recover." Peasantese.
Witness for See. To witness is more
than merely to see, or observe; it is to observe, and to tell afterward.
Would-be. "The would-be
assassin was arrested." The word doubtless supplies a want, but we can
better endure the want than the word. In the instance of the assassin, it is
needless, for he who attempts to murder is an assassin, whether he succeeds or
not.